People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some argue that, people should not opt the courses which they are interested in, rather they should study a course based on the job. This essay completely disagrees with the statement, because studying will become boring and it leads to stress.
First of all, studying is not a one time task, it is a recurring activity. People should study a subject area based on their interest. This will broaden their horizons. When a student or a professional study a course based on interest, they would really work hard to understand the deeper context. This will eventually lead to success in exam and job. In addition, when people study out of personal interest they come up with more innovative ideas. To prove this particularly effective, A recent survey by the Mother Teresa University has revealed that, students are more likely to get jobs easily in their interested area compared to the ones who study a course just to obtain a job.
On the other hand, studying is a mundane job, when it is not interesting. Things do not turn up positive most times when they are forced. Similarly when a course is not done out of self-interest, it does not bring fruitful results. It result in stress. For example, if an employee is forced to do a course for a project without interest he will not perform well, this adds stress both to employer and employee. As a result the ROI will be affected. Hence, it is advised to take the course based on the personal wish.
To conclude, job is essential for life, but it should not be boring and adding stress to life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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...Similarly when a course is not done out of self-interest, it does not bring frui...
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Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s stress both to employer and employee. As a result the ROI will be affected. Henc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, really, similarly, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69343065693 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53013169869 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0653967035 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6470588235 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315348257259 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999993581525 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749436451295 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189423815999 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105910905068 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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