People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some reasons why people had better to follow new customs and traditions when they settle down in other countries. Firstly, if immigrants do not willing to gain knowledge about new country’s culture, they could do something wrong, even illegal in the host environment, which is lead to a creation of culture barrier with local people. As the result, they will be isolated in society and have a bad feeling during all the time they live in this nation. For example, beef is one of the most well-known foods in many countries, but with Indian, they believe cows are sacred animals and people who eat cows are sinners and would have a strong punishment with discriminations of most residents around them.
In addition, people living in different countries also have different ways to treat others, especially on work. To be more detail, in Western culture, if employees make some mistakes, the manager just gives a clever complaint and encourages them to solve those problems. In contrast, the Eastern person likes to scold and uses some negative comments to them since he thinks that this is the best way to make someone become better. Therefore, if individuals know how they will be dealt by local people in this country, they could not be shocked and would feel more comfortable.
In conclusion, I still believe that immigrants should respect and observe some customs and traditions in the host country to live well in new environment.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95901639344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66500608961 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7075545305 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.444444444 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190501989908 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822807621435 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795487175956 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135763975611 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405952254561 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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