People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
The working hours are incredibly important for everyone to meet the requirements of daily life. It tends to have a increasing rate of working long hours impact over the health. The people have health issues and family problems by doing work overtime. In ky opinion, the working hours should be restricted by companies because of protecting the personal life of employees.
In one hand, the employees who work late nights have achieved so much things like they have greater incomes, responsibility, authority and reputation among all other colleagues. they can have bonuses and rewards for their hard work. companies appreciate them and let them feel positive about their efforts.
On the other hand, this also have significantly increased rate of negative effects on their life which is quite dangerous. Firstly, they feel depress and get anxious by facing overload of work. Without having a enough sleep and energy they won't be able to focus on work and as well on family. The health issues challenge them in terms of having a backbone problem occured due to long sitting, low blood pressure and diabetes which can cause heart disease. Another one is, they don't have sufficient time to socialising with the family and friends. The way of communication get changed and looking for a reassurance to talk with anyone else. The pressure of work develop frustration in the employees which create disturbance in their mind because of that they respond rudely to their closed ones. they feel sometimes ignored and neglected and by this they cut off themselves from any gatherings. If they are married and have kids than the situation will get more worse.
In conclusion, I suggest that companies need to be concerned about the employees personal health and life. The overtime should be restricted and give them responsible time of hours to go on a vacation, holiday or for doing whatever they want which improve their living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rements of daily life. It tends to have a increasing rate of working long hours i...
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Suggestion:
...tecting the personal life of employees. In one hand, the employees who work late...
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Suggestion: many
...s who work late nights have achieved so much things like they have greater incomes, ...
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Suggestion: They
... reputation among all other colleagues. they can have bonuses and rewards for their ...
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Suggestion: Companies
...onuses and rewards for their hard work. companies appreciate them and let them feel posit...
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Suggestion:
...them feel positive about their efforts. On the other hand, this also have signif...
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...facing overload of work. Without having a enough sleep and energy they wont be ab...
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Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04702194357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63504937813 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4952613774 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272703337929 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955145965324 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836640463918 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189805426914 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12336924568 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.