People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a popular belief that the youngers in modern days have the ability to live without any limitations. While this issue is burdensome to some extent, I strongly side with it.
Firstly, it is worth pointing out that taking care of children in the right direction is surely the most crucial mission of parents. It is necessary that parents can understand that freedom is a great opportunity for children to discover their own potential, pursue their interests as well as follow their passions. Unlike the past, strict parenting methods with over supervision have long been applied to raise children. For instance, many families used to demand excellence from their kids so that they had to meet their parents’ high expectation without any motivations. Therefore, parents are expected to give their children as much freedom in choosing passion as possible.
Secondly, Freedom enables children to develop themselves in all aspects. Specifically, the youngers can obtain unrestricted reservoir of human knowledge when accessing information from various multimedia resources. Indeed, a Vietnamese child could learn foreign languages and some soft skills via Youtube, a video streaming service, without having to register for a course or attend classes. Therefore, having freedom may be considered as a step toward maturity for children.
To conclude, I am firmly convinced that children today have more and more freedom and this tendency may have positive effects on their life in the long run. Moreover, it can be reiterated that people are encouraged to do everything freely to be well-rounded person as long as they do not harm others
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...tential, pursue their interests as well as follow their passions. Unlike the past, strict...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29118773946 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82455267194 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1202790163 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212124895753 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735508346737 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566233703237 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125040782896 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609776935753 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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