People think that countries should produce foods their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold the view that it is more beneficial for a country to grow its own residents’ food than to import them from other countries. While domestic food production can bring about a number of upsides, I strongly believe that it is nigh on impossible for a country to meet its citizens’ demands and importing might be a more fausible option.
On the one hand, I agree that food self-sufficiency is advantageous to some extent. To begin with, local production of food might be a better way to ensure low-price products for residents. In fact, imported food includes transportation costs, taxation and many other charges that eventually result in the higher food price, compared to that of local products. Furthermore, if a country was able to grow its own food, it would stand a golden chance to export those agricultural products to other countries. This might help to earn revenues from the outside of the country and have a tremendous impact on its economic growth.
Despite the arguments above, I would argue that it is nearly impractical for a country to be self-dependent when it comes to food. Firstly, food production relies mostly on natural conditions, for example, weather, cultivable lands, rainfall, which cannot be adjusted regardless of how developed a country is. Take coffee, one of the most prevalent ingredients in many different kinds of drinks consumed by people across the world, as an example. Coffee trees are only able to grow at a temperature from 15 to 24 degrees celcius in rich soil with few pests or diseases. Moreover, in this integration era, when a country can comprise of a large number of people coming from various other countries in the world, it is apparent that importing food from other countries is an inevitable way for every country in order to meet their own residents’ demands.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that while countries can benefit from self-produced food, it is impossible for them to provide their entire population with food needed without importing some from other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00864553314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88335119109 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544668587896 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7786292714 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253691258321 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983633655255 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597372409032 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17348079016 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212883697978 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.