The diagrams below show how glass containers such as bottles are produced in recycled

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced in recycled.

The two given diagrams depict the explicit steps to manufacture and recycle glass containers.
As can be seen from the charts, it is clear that there are only four main stages in the manufacturing process of glass-based products, meanwhile five steps are required to recycle them.
At the first stage in the production of glass containers, three different raw materials, namely sand, soda ash, limestone, and other chemicals are mixed together. The resulting mixture is then melted in a furnace at a high temperature, which is approximately 1500 celcius degrees, until it turns into a liquid. Following this, this liquid undergoes a glassblowing process where it is shaped into different kinds of glass products.
The recycling process begins with the preparation of used glass containers. After that, they are sorted by colour and washed in order to remove impurities. These objects are then crushed into small chunks and melted before being moulded into new products.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27741935484 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80341697258 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696774193548 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0704527817 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119474316497 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576120004725 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615738533644 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889165404424 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528987788647 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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