People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.
What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people residing in urban areas because they offer high living standards. However, living in such places can also be stressful, and this essay will discuss the challenges facing the citizens before suggesting possible measures to improve the quality of their lives.
One of the major problems of living in big cities may be the high property prices. For example, in major cities in Viet Nam such as Ho Chi Minh, the cost of a one-bedroom flat is so exorbitant that many people could not afford it. As a result, they are forced to live outside the center and commute to work. This could make their lives more stressful and inconvenient. To solve this problem, the government could invest more resources into building more affordable houses. This practice would allow more people to buy their own homes, making their lives easier.
Traffic and air pollution are other issues worth mentioning. Most mega-cities nowadays are overrun with cars and other private vehicles, which often leads to traffic congestion: a major source of drivers’ frustration. Moreover, exhaust fumes/emissions from these vehicles cause increased levels of pollution. As a consequence, more and more people are suffering from respiratory diseases, such as asthma and bronchitis. However, these problems could be addressed by imposing higher taxes on vehicles and introducing a congestion charge for drivers entering the center. By doing this, the amount of traffic would eventually decline, which helps reduce traffic jams and improve air quality.
To conclude, prohibitive living costs, high volumes of traffic, and air pollution are several main drawbacks of city life, which could be tackled by government supports such as more investments into low-price housing and introducing new laws to control traffic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntroducing new laws to control traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35763888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72186567606 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1496138262 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253779701038 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762342284211 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056375606405 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141648830371 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042563200677 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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