(Phat) Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, purchasing products such as books, air tickets or groceries online is becoming more common. From my perspective, I believe that this trend brings about more positives than negatives.
First of all, the argument worth noting here is that shopping online is time-saving. Instead of travelling long distances to the store or wait in long queues to pay bills, people are able to easily select their favourite products at home and have them delivered to their home with only a few clicks. Furthermore, to address the situation of consumers buying items that are not acceptable such as ill-fitting clothes or faulty hardware, numerous online brands accept the return process at a prescribed time to fulfill the need of customers. Finally, online shops provide a lower price than in real stores, for they are designing online selling programs to attract clients now. To clarify, a great number of marketing campaigns like discount codes or buy one get one for free were launched to appeal to purchasers.
Admittedly, it appears that online stores would give poor customer service. For instance, several buyers find it difficult to contact online sellers or, occasionally, they reply hastily. Additionally, statistics have shown that frauds have happened due to cybercrime. Criminals could act as if they are trading goods to deceive shoppers into transferring money to them, thereby stealing sensitive information and hacking at credit card are feasible.
In conclusion, online shopping offers the public some great benefits, provided that individuals need to find well-known brands and be aware of potential dangers before buying anything online.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76363201803 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1994131785 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121974257194 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466759984637 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765370335226 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909488250692 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103573753432 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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