Politicans are responsible for protection of environment than individual.To what extent you agree and disagree?

Essay topics: Politicans are responsible for protection of environment than individual.To what extent you agree and disagree?

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It is great cinflicting issue that environment safety is the duty of political leaders rather than individual person.However,I partially agree with this aforementioned statement and i will give my views in upcoming paragraphs before reached to appropriate conclusion.

There are multifarious aspects that a person can preserve atmosphere in several ways.Firstly, when people visit to a shop for buy product, they should consider the things which not produce gases and donot put worse impact on aura.For instance, household things such as refrigerator air conditionors.Before purchasing these things must consider in mind that these will not damage the environment.Secondly,people must keep there near areas neat and clean, they must use dustbins whenever they want to throw waste material.As a result, they can also avoid to face diseases.

On the flip side, there are different views that blame to the politicians regarding environment security.First of all, government must introduce new policies to that people do not cut the trees.If in any condition people cut the trees then the people must be fined by government.Second of all, government must also show strictness towards the public.If human being destroy environment protection so as a result, natural resources may be vanished.So, government must use hard rules for the safety of atmosphere.

To conclude, it is responsibility of both leaders and as well as individual.So, to blame only one party may be wrong for safety of environment in which we live.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48085106383 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56674444167 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634042553191 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.110910352 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.0 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.25 7.06120827912 513% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116612835729 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791684044928 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423874311982 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791684044928 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423874311982 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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