Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
There is no denying that water is one of the most essential elements for life on our green shelter. However, these years, water contamination has occurred more frequently due to industrial activities and oil spill, which triggers detrimental effects on not only human but also the ecosystem.
The first major culprit for contaminating the water resources is industrial activities from human. Since companies and factories have been mushrooming recently, the number of chemical toxic compounds discharged into the water sources has also undergone a drastic increase, wreaking havoc on natural habitat of many aquatic species. Consequently, many freshwater or saltwater flora or fauna have been pushed to the brink of extinction, leading to the ecosystem disorganization. Not to mention, even if the industrial wastes are buried underneath the ground, still they can permeate into the soil, subsequently poison the underground water and adversely affect human health if consumed.
Another cause of water pollution is oil spill. In fact, throughout the history, human have witnessed numerous oil spill, severely contaminating the sea water. Most of marine animals fail to digest oil, leading to unavoidable deaths if there is no action taken from government. Moreover, the spills are also to blame for damaging tourist industry, particularly in coastal regions as they ruin tourist destinations, trigger shellfish poisoning and serious reputational impacts to the tourism industry. A tangible example is the Deepwater Horizon oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico in 2010, which led to the significant decline in number of tourists, even in neighboring areas, and total loss of more than 400 million dollars.
In conclusion, it is obvious that the emergence of water pollution stems from industrial activities and oil spill, exerting negative impacts on both human and ecosphere. To save the water resources, the governments should find solutions and stage intervention on time before it is exacerbated.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55700325733 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99440852306 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.52113811 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151901833949 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618578169467 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442448851896 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930941287528 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125048430375 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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