Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible causes and predict consequences?
These days, that many cities grow outward around the world has been a subject of public debate. Whilst many believe that this is a positive trend, I am of the idea that it also exerts many negative implications. This essay will analyze the forces behind this trend and its consequences.
Some compelling reasons can be cited to shed light on the urban sprawl around the globe. First, rural to urban migration is deemed as the primary cause of this trend. In fact, since a myriad of company, factory and health facility are located in urban areas, a great number of people living in country sides move to cities annually in search of better standards of living as well as job opportunities, which makes these metropolitan regions more jam-packed. As a result, that cities grow outward is unavoidable. Second, the urban population growth is also to blame for the expansion of metropolitan areas. That means, to meet the dwellers’ demand for accommodation, governments have to enlarge the cities by establishing more infrastructures as well as amenities in the suburbs.
However, there are several problems inherent in the rise of cities expansion. First, living in these regions does equal the degradation of people’s health as the air quality in teeming urban areas has been on an alarming level. By regularly getting exposed to a sheer volume of carbon and exhaust fumes, people dwelling in urban areas are prone to suffer many serious health problems such as respiratory diseases, which shortens their longevity. Moreover, that rural to urban migration creates multi-cultural society might lead to regional discrimination. For example, children from minority groups are usually victims of bullying at school as other students hold prejudice against their social background, which affects adversely their self-esteem and mental health in the long term.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the urbanization stemming from rural to urban migration and the rise in citizen’s population is not without demerits. Not only does it put people’s heathy at risk but also trigger discrimination in community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31952662722 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97852595929 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.805689131 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860115779443 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035083354166 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511756779007 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493780692592 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448076254303 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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