Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reason behind the issue?
Polygamy is the word which stand when a man can do two or more marriages at a one time. In the polygamy man are think that we are diminished when someone else is added upon. For instance the given topic asserts that what are the reasons and solutions of the polygamy? In this essay, i will examine the possible reason for this trend and suggest some of practical policies individual could implement take to resduce the polygamy.
The first step is to understand the basic reasons of the polygamy. Broadly speaking there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost reason is the discrimination. It is very important reason behind this beacuse are divorce or polygamy can occur through this. The discrimination in such way; skin colour, age, education. There are so many mens who think and did marriage because they are not happy with their one single wife because she is not well educated or a colour difference. As a result the men not satisfied with her wife so that's why they done the other marriages. A good solution of this problem is here that the government already set the restrictions on this but they implement properly on the society relate to discrimination.
The second most important reason behind this the acceptable some of the society of community. There tge government give the right to men can do four marriages. It is possible in mulsim religion. The Pakistan government make this law for increasing the population of there country. But the westren culture not adopt this only Muslims are accepted. For instance, the effective solution of this problem the government stuck this rule because in this situation the only one individual cannot do anything so government make the restrictions on this and set penality on this and also soem jail presentment. As well as the government give name to polygamy as a crime.
In this conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse, while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this could probably be solved by government. The government give the counseling to couples who not understand each other and clear those disputes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, broadly speaking, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70879073739 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7918758564 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141924810819 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549547728857 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481099569924 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969244637989 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239451358085 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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