It is widely believed that The popular sports event like the football world cup and other sports are very useful in order to release stress from global as well as to bring out love for our own country despite being harmed anyone. In this essay, I will discuss this topic along with the reason why I agree with this statement.
There are a plethora of issues in global health, terrorism, the war between countries, Culminated in enormous stress among people. The main reason why I agree with the above statement because of various sports events like the football world cup and cricket etc. Where people comes from different countries to watch while their players are playing and representing their beloved country. In this situation community involves emotionally and mentally, Which helps them tremendously to deprive stress and be relaxed. Moreover, It allows them to show patriotism for their respective country. A good illustration of this that, When our team plays something like football world cup or cricket match and so on, Where belonging community seems to be cheering by shouting their country name proudly and waving the country flag to motivate their players.
In addition, when our team wins we feel very proud that we belong to the world cup winning country, which arises proud feeling from us. On the other hand, When our team losses it virtually brings tears from eyes and we feel very bad and frustrated. Which clearly shows the love for their beloved country. I believed that It is better to show love for our country through sports rather than war and terrorism.
To put in a nutshell, In my opinion, There are already various countries are fighting with each other on the border which brings tension amongst people globally. Popular Sports event like football world cup should be conducted in order to remove stress and show love for our country without cruel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94321766562 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3564014197 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7955163137 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212065883231 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769564606272 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735663125847 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156240465304 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798665734899 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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