Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach

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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains.
Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

"Industrial revolution" made its premier among the politically unstable European countries around the 18th century and changed the world once and for all. Innovations plundered in various government sectors ranging from automobiles, agriculture, health and hygiene. This sets the cascade of the great population surge in developing countries, hence demand for food grains to feed the growing population rose. Politicians and scientists started planning the implementing of genetically modified crops for better production of food grains. Positives and negatives of this approach will be discussed in the following paragraph.

Firstly, Gm crops are scietifically modified plants in order to meet the shortcomings of the naturally grown crops. Decreased suspectability to infection and pests is the most potent benefit of GM crops over natural crops, as natural crops are highly vulnerable to all kinds of diseases and thus usage of pesticides and unwanted chemicals drastically increases. This is avoided by GM crops, in addition the other advantages include, higher yield per square acre, drought resistent.

Every innovation has its unavoidable side effects and GM crops are indifferent to this fact. These genitically altered crops are infamous among general population as this is considered unethical and against the nature's will. Apart from moral values, recent studies shows GM crops may be less nutritious and can be thethered to many health related side effects including growth retardation and diminished mental growth.

With every usuful invention, the human society takes a giant leap towards betterment and as a fact coin always has two sides. Hence with the scientific advancements there is always hope for turning better sides of a coin.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...less nutritious and can be thethered to many health related side effects including growth r...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nd as a fact coin always has two sides. Hence with the scientific advancements there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65413533835 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01832644579 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661654135338 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6455044906 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216869606972 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717121881044 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578151690102 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107315096615 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589559362233 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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