At the present time , the population of some countries include a relative large number of young adults , compared with the number of older people
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Today , in some countries the number of young people is significantly higher than that of elder people . From my point of view , this situation causes more drawbacks than benefits to those countries.
One of advantages is increasing the population . In some countries , the goverment may support the family have more children because that can rise the population . Singapore , for instance , has been improving its education recent years as they have a lot of young generation . As well as this , they can develop the comprehensive systems including the qualified teachers and the good environment.
One of disadvantages is the place for study . If the young population keep increasing , the school will not be enough for the study . As a result , the government have to spent a substantial budget for constructing more new schools . Also , when they have the new schools , the number of teachers might not adapt to educate them . Consequently , the universities have to enroll more students following teaching eduacation.
Another disadvantage is the quality of education . If a classroom has many pupils , the teacher can not take care thoughtful for all of them . For example , when they have a emergency problem , they need some help from their teachers . Furthermore , when they grow up , they can encounter with the unemployment because the company can not receive everybody to get a job
In conclusion , some countries having the young population more than the elder population that brings advantages and causes disadvantages . This problem need to be solved by the state .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25301204819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01446690168 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534136546185 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0515069426 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186341921151 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627922576173 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497142388605 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122800239977 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638542739775 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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