Proportion of young adults in some countries like Pakistan, India, China, etc. is considerably higher compared to the older people. Although older generation provides us with knowledge and experience, but the youth is the basic strength of any country. The advantages of whose, I believe, far exceed any drawbacks.
Most importantly, the young generation is dynamic, energetic and exceptionally innovative. Once these young adults are provided jobs, they can bring in income to the country which helps keeping the GDP up which hence, saves the economy of a country from dwindling. These young adults are the working labour force and back-bone of a country. Besides, more youth means more people the country can groom, thereby, this youth provides the country with skills and services to polish. If most of this youth is used to their fullest potential, these countries may outgrow and outshine everybody else. Likewise, countries can use this manpower and potential in agricultural, industrial, education and business sectors. In heavy industries these adults can work as labour, while in others services and time is exchanged for earnings.
In truth, the only way a country could be lacking would be when it is not able to fully develop this man-power and benefit from their skills and services. This happens in the scenario when a country becomes unable to provide the youth with the necessities that are critical for growth and improvement. A country which is unable to give way to job opportunities and basic education for the improvement of individuals' aptitude and skills, such a country suffers downfall.
Contrarily, even with the youth rising to the apex, elder people are still a valuable asset of any country. The older generation posses wide range of knowledge from history to the practicalities of life. This makes such people to be a better fit for decision making positions. Furthermore, the services and taxes they paid had henceforth led the country to its development.
Even so, I firmly hold the opinion that having young adults in great number is a blessing in disguise for any country. If everything is well planned and schemed out, all the disadvantages are outweighed in front of the importance, vitality and use of this youth. The young have more to contribute to the society and the country as a whole. This is why it is important for to a country have an active workforce than dependent senior citizens.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, may, so, still, well, while, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11055276382 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79268163788 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525125628141 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4788551685 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212998727876 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620980964557 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327779369552 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117736014041 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396502788335 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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