At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage.
People's life expectancy has increased in many societies, however, there is an enormous growth in the number of young generation. Although teenagers can contribute extraordinarily to society, I would argue that this demographic change can bring about some problems.
The main benefit associated with a young generation is that young adults absorb new information and complete work more quickly compared to elderly people, which would bring enormous profits for those companies where they are working on. Consequently, this helps employers improve their living standards, as well as they can also give their surplus money to help those people who are living under poverty conditions.
However, there are several drawbacks when teenagers become the main resource of a country. Firstly, immature people have lived a short life in the society, so they may lack the experience in face-to-face with difficult situations at work. Conflicts between co-workers, for example, many young workers are likely difficult to solve problems with others, which can have a negative effect to work efficiencies. Another problem is that governments need to spend more money on entertainment and education aspects to bring particular benefits for their citizens, Therefore, this could cut the amount of money on other important investments. Lastly, an increase in young population leads to an unemployment rate in some countries. Korean, for instance, it is difficult for Korean adults in chasing top jobs in their country. As a result, many unemployment tends to export labours to other developed countries to earn money.
In conclusion, a young generation plays an important role in their own country, however, there are a few disadvantages of this trend outweigh the benefits. Governments should adopt some measures to balance the population between young and elderly to bring the best advantage for their nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 832, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unemployment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much unemployment', 'a good deal of unemployment'.
Suggestion: much unemployment; a good deal of unemployment
...top jobs in their country. As a result, many unemployment tends to export labours to other develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49488054608 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90851872644 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5892285085 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160331440763 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543662462615 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370089878029 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100665277952 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019759885665 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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