At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages!!!
At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.
Nowadays, the number of young adults dominate the population in several countries than the elderly people, this phenomenon brings more advantages than the drawback which would outline in this essay.
To begin with, I believe a country which having more young people is beneficial. one of those is the development country since the large number of people with productive age. this is because, the young ones explore their environments and available materials, which may lead to amazing discovery that could change the world. For example, twenty-year-old Oxford University's student found an application that can be used to communication which now become a well-known application and almost everyone uses. He was trying to experiment with infrared and the idea of connecting people, in the same way, struck his mind.
However, there disadvantage caused by booming population of youngest in a country. The one potentially danger is the low quality of jobs in a state due to the lack of experience for work. that is to say, if young ones are deficient in carrying out the basic chores, since they do not understand how done it. Moreover, they become lack of efficiency in doing things. For instance, many companies or factories prefer to employ experienced adults who know the job as the fact of inexperienced young could be detrimental to organization goals. Furthermore, senior citizens have more experience and understanding to solve a work than young adults in a nation.
In conclusion, having youngsters explore their environment and innovate things would be result more advantages in a nation.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 78
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 78
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, in the same way, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32871972318 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98816926256 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0433916727 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413678841753 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127886040126 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162883663663 0.0667982634062 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239296136633 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200157104046 0.056905535591 352% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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