Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Through centuries and generations, it clearly cannot be denied that the responsibility of the mothers to their children is enormous and impossible to replaced. after all, the role of the women has been overrated so that mothers all over the world have to face too much pressure dealing with the society and their children. therefore, in this troublesome era the men should share and help their wives and children to have a brighter life.
it can be seen that, life is harder and it continues to get tougher day after day. A woman with a lower health condition, lower numbers of suitable jobs to work will have to encounter many crisis and if the woman has a baby, there will be more complications. Hence, everyone has their price, although women do not have their trust on men, a husband is surely till a considerable option to take care of all the problems. For instance, like people usually said: men make houses, women make homes, therefore if the wife has a good husband , she would have less worries about the family’s income or how to handle broken stuffs of the house and so on
In another hand, lacking of fatherhood is absolutely a huge trouble for the evolution of the kids. Weather boys or girls, sons and daughters should have their father. Sometimes, there are some confusions that they only can ask their fathers or only their dads the men of a family can solve the obstacles. For example, boys cannot ask their mother about strange things happen during their adolescent time or the fathers can give the daughters favorable places to depend on or some tips with she’s boyfriends that moms will have lots of difficulties to perform.
In conclusion, fatherhood and motherhood is equaly meaningful. it will be better for childend to have both their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...is enormous and impossible to replaced. after all, the role of the women has been ove...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ng with the society and their children. therefore, in this troublesome era the men should...
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Suggestion: It
... children to have a brighter life. it can be seen that, life is harder and it...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crisis seems to be countable; consider using: 'many crises'.
Suggestion: many crises
...ble jobs to work will have to encounter many crisis and if the woman has a baby, there will...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...therefore if the wife has a good husband , she would have less worries about the f...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun worries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ife has a good husband , she would have less worries about the family's income ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...od and motherhood is equaly meaningful. it will be better for childend to have bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84039087948 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61561794688 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4737465386 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128711067311 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05392002649 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302188026803 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940366409675 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032135942486 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.