News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
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new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">To begin with, i new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">believenew Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;"> that precious news must have two conditions. First of all, the information must be accepted and concerned by the readers. As a result publishers have to investigate not only their reeders’ interest but also the new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">ethical standards of their customers. Seccondly, the quality of the article is the most important factor for a success of a tv program or a newspaper. To be more precise, the title must be credible and have a conceivable source, people are more likely to read or watch things that have high plausibility. As a result the news which consumes more interest and believability will attract a better amount of viewers to its side.new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">
new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">On the other hand, It is true to say that there is a large amount of terrible information extracted around us everyday . Especially some dishonest newspaper, titles wihout sources or without informative news, these things gives us nothings and make us confuse from getting information. Personally, i believe that more good news will help the society grow better. For example, if only valuable information are reported people can learn a lot from reading or watching programs. Furthermore, giving true information will help the people recognize their society real situation.new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">
new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">In conclusion, news editors should release high standard information to the audience. Moreover, the good news should have a higher rate of appear and the bad news should be heavily censored new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:16.0000pt;">
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 7.20504731861 5.12529762239 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.09048057622 2.80592935109 288% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.184700834 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.142857143 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10655534431 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607167788273 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581255796437 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969513126186 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385277657081 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.83 12.4159519038 200% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.