Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, it goes without saying that people have to make millions of decisions everyday in their life. Although I agree that we have to make many selections , in some cases I still don’t know if we have plenty of options to select.
First of all, it is easy to see that the economic development has led to the appearances of a large amount of new products. Thus, the number of selections that people have to decide whatever it is necessary or suitable for their life will increase. In another aspect, it is not just only about handling goods but people also have to deal with options in their personal life. For example, people have to pick their schools, makes a right choice of getting new friends, what to deal with dinner, lunch or breakfast and so on. In simple terms, making choices is one of the indispensable part of our daily life, as time flies the amount and the variety of choices are increasing everyday.
On another hand, I wonder if we really have so many choices like I mentioned above? From my point of view, it is a fact of life that people only have two real compromises. To choose or not to choose. Therefore, if we select the choosing option, we will have many more choices and things will go on. However, if we select no choosing option, everything ends there. In my opinions, the most important thing is not what people’s choices, the main point is whether they choose or not. Furthermore , this decision will most impact to a person’s life. For example, it is not important where a student study, the important point is whether this student choose to study or not.
Although we all have to make milions of decisions everyday, our short life doesn’t give us many chances for important selections. People should think carefully whenever making a selections of their lifetime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ople have to make millions of decisions everyday in their life. Although I agree that we...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ree that we have to make many selections , in some cases I still don't know i...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d the variety of choices are increasing everyday. On another hand, I wonder if we real...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... whether they choose or not. Furthermore , this decision will most impact to a per...
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Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e all have to make milions of decisions everyday, our short life doesn't give us ma...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a selection' or simply 'selections'?
Suggestion: a selection; selections
... should think carefully whenever making a selections of their lifetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73270440252 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62214130054 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525157232704 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3064828421 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214839490372 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717748349934 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527085136345 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141471975375 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433083164384 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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