"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In terms of a nation's health spending, a huge chunk should veer away from curative and must go to health information dissemination and measures to prevent illnesses. I strongly agree with this statement.
Today, even with the numerous advancements in medical technology, countries are still struggling to cope with the increasing numbers of morbid diseases that require treatment. Personally, I think there could be a way to reverse that, by allowing more capital budget go to ways to inform people and other ways to prevent diseases. One good example is by reinforcing reproductive health education at school levels, this way adolescents can be made more aware of the consequences that may arise because of engaging in unprotected sex, such as unwanted pregnancies and more worse sexually- transmitted infections. Schools and other government agencies can also hand out contraceptives to further reinforce the benefits that they try to gain. Another way is by promoting healthy lifestyle. We all know the harms of frequent cigarette- smoking, hospitals are packed with people dying with respiratory complications. For me, it is the duty of the state to impose laws that are capable of lowering it down. People should be made aware of the risks, TV commercials, symposiums have all been known to decrease cases to some extent though not entirely.
In my own opinion, it is easier to stop diseases at its roots rather than wasting a nation's entire resources to treat a full blown case that is impossible to cure, on that note, I strongly agree that more budget should be spent to health education and preventive measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
In terms of a nations health spending, a huge chunk should ve...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...d sex, such as unwanted pregnancies and more worse sexually- transmitted infections. Schoo...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...seases at its roots rather than wasting a nations entire resources to treat a full blown ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13962264151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92537784374 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4199608876 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233769115346 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772857250182 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655170047608 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179956190778 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441533172771 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.