“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?
The investment on researching and experiments to cure the maladies is required a huge amount of money. As a result of this, some people claims that the prevention for maladies is more important and should invest on preventative measures. Even though the prevention seems the most optimistic way to achieve, in finance perspective, I believe that this is unrealistic and therefore, I completely disagree with this approach. I think the research for treating diseases is still required.
Nowadays government spends a huge amount of money on researching and experimenting for science and chemical developments. In the US only, it had spent about $2.5 billion of government money solely on chemical developments in 2015. As a result of this, people claim that this money should not be spent on research and development for fixing the illness but it should be used for the prevention of illnesses.
Investing on preparation and prevention for diseases has financial advantages. It is far cheaper than money is required to be spent for researching and curing for diseases. If the government only focuses their money to be used on prevention, they can use the budgeted money to support for other departments such as treasury, military or education. Therefore, the financial part for prevention is beneficial than that of researching and development spending.
In conclusion, the prevention of potential diseases is the dream for everyone. However, this is not practically possible since there is insufficient technological availability and lack of knowledge in that field. As a result researching and developing required fields can costs even more than treating, so the research for treating should be continued.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230508474576 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.169491525424 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0745762711864 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542372881356 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0271186440678 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.166101694915 0.122226691241 136% => OK
Participles: 0.0677966101695 0.0403226058552 168% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.18270328479 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0326793684256 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0983050847458 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0203389830508 0.021408717616 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1705.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33828996283 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397769516729 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31970260223 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.289962825279 0.203846283523 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.208178438662 0.137316102897 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18270328479 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.1437305334 60.7387585426 79% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2142857143 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0494016587 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.1845459373 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.85135135135 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243664305468 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12861685831 0.102741220458 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0700249101382 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572161003183 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0738343280386 0.148594505496 50% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122763244747 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528226217629 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381122406986 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.021446774818 0.0638462369009 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185412574418 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568500257994 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.