Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

Essay topics:

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

Motorways are becoming the popular ways to travel to destination that are far away and can reach there in a short period of time. However, this has been insufficient attention paid to result multifarious problems such as global warming. Therefore, the local authorities can initiate congestion charge policies or other alternative methods to solve this issue.
Motorways are the easiest ways to travel to metropolitan areas from rural areas in a short time. However the increase use of motorways has created several issues and how to reduce such usage has becoming a major concern for the government. Since problems have arisen with this, alternative solutions have had to be researched.
The environment will be the primarily affected by this, because it results in global warming. All vehicles are dependent on fossil fuels which substances being released as a toxic chemical that are releasing at atmosphere and this causes various environmental and health hazard. Due to this, the world is suffering from the numerous newly created viruses such as ZIKA, Yellow dust and bird flu.
Perhaps the most apparent annoyance for public is the nuisance that results from the traffic, noise, the dust and the unpleasant odours emanating from the motorways. From this, people can suffer with respiratory issues involving inhale of toxic airs. Thus, the immediate solutions should be sought.
To solve this issue, the local authorities can impose congestion fees. In the UK, for example, after charging of congestion fees, the number of vehicles using of motorways have reduced by half from 2014 to 2015. By forcing the public to disuse of motorways, people will use more of public transportation as an alternative choice and which can result in lesser number of vehicles on motorways.
Alternatively, the government could provide more alternative public transportation to cover long journeys for a shorter time to get rid of personal drivers from the motorways. This will encourage people to use of public transportation instead of their personal vehicles. Thus, this approach can reduce the problems caused by motorway usages.
In conclusion, despite the convenient and faster travelling to the destination, the motorways create various health and environmental issues. Therefore, it is important to find the effective solutions to tackle this issue.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...far away and can reach there in a short period of time. However, this has been insufficient at...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...areas from rural areas in a short time. However the increase use of motorways has creat...
^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242053789731 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.158924205379 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110024449878 0.0946595960268 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0464547677262 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00733496332518 0.0437548338989 17% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.112469437653 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0562347188264 0.0403226058552 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87341606023 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0440097799511 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112469437653 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268948655257 0.021408717616 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122249388753 0.011925033212 103% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2346.0 1933.35771543 121% => OK
No of words: 369.0 316.048096192 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35772357724 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422764227642 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30352303523 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233062330623 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157181571816 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87341606023 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523035230352 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.811224851 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.45 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9486841883 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.814263465372 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.802303523 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.93103448276 1.69124875643 114% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270010462312 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.094706851761 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.09687047982 0.0668466124924 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568897056444 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144269153093 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101130403844 0.134430193775 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586316767915 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32839166246 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0843681997265 0.0638462369009 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167063200736 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161878839774 0.058150111329 28% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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