Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

Essay topics:

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

In recent decades, the advantages of motorways have been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although it appears some problems when building motorways, there are some feasible solutions to address it.

There are many problems that can be caused by motorways. First, since drivers have rights to ride at the high speed on streets, it has been attributed to the highly increasing accidents recently. In fact, there have been more accidents recorded on highways due to the high speed, they find it hard to control their driving in the emergency, such as on rainy days, which leads to implicit threats when driving on those streets. Second, although it has some benefits for commuters, it has some negative impacts to the environment. It means demolishing the current buildings and residential areas to make way for motorway construction is the main culprit to serious pollutions, along with heavy traffic congestion on motorways, emitting miasmas and smug, which is detrimental to our environment.

On the other hand, we also have some practical resolutions to alleviate these troubles. First, by controlling the speed of driving, it is possible to reduce the number of crashes on highways. For example, governments can enact some strict laws that limit the driving speed, apply many heavy punishments and fines if some people who break law, which contribute to diminish the amount of highway accidents. Second, we should encourage to use vehicle alternative to reduce the level of air pollution. It means authorities should have long-term strategies to facilitate usage of eco-friendly cars and private motorbikes that consume electricity instead of petroleum, partly solving the burden of air contamination in recent years.

In conclusion, there are some problems and solutions related to motorways that should be taken into consideration. By applying some effective methods, we can make the situation better.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41721854305 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89298630562 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1201401493 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101053926547 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380102066013 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442657204726 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073571594773 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029415939657 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.