"Prevention is better than cure."Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.

An adage “Prevention is better than cure” is popular in the societies. That’s why some individuals say that the majority of the budget by the government should allocate for the health education and prevention methods. I agree with this statement and this essay will outline why a large amount of fund should divide into such activities.

It is very difficult to cure some diseases like hepatitis, measles, tetanus and so on, in such cases, there are many vaccines were discovered by scientist to prevent such diseases. Hepatitis B, for example, is very dangerous than AIDS and it is easily transmitted disease through blood cells. So that if there is a proper vaccination system in the country, it can be prevented from attacking to person. However, the expenditure should increase in treatment of such diseases by the health ministry.

Another safest way to allocate budget is in lessening pollution level and clean the cities which are also a great method of preventing people from diseases. By managing vehicles in roads, mines and so on can decline the life threating diseases like cancer, asthma, bronchitis, and so on. Therefore, there may need plenty of money as well as good management and team.

Furthermore, the fatal rate in road accidents can be decreased and prevent from people by injuring inside the country. Annually approximately thousand people killing and injured in road mishap due to lack of proper management of road as well as traffic lights and rules and regulations. In such a case, many people are paying plenty of money to treatment in hospitals due to this they might be suffering from the monetary problem. Thus, the government should allocate money to manage the means of transportation and other related systems.

In conclusion, the expenditure on treatment of diseases is higher than prevention in some cases. And the people think that prevention is better than care and I agree with the government should spread the budget on health education as well as in the method of prevention from only treatment.

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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12759643917 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84471783949 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7721570787 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34124562075 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114002322677 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118247038486 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197445783669 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130903935525 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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