The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extend do you agree?
It is thought by some, that the government ought to spend money on preventive measures of health problems and diseases than to treatment and medicine, as it is more important. In my opinion, monetary help should be provided more to prevention measures, while treatment and medicine development should not be neglected.
Development of preventive measures can safe personal health and life, as some diseases are incurable. People should have free or cheap access to preventive measures and it is the one of effective solution to be healthy. For instance, people who inclined to cancer diseases should check their health more often than any other people, as today all people know that cancer is more treatable on early stages. When people are informed how they can be healthy and what they should avoid in order to be healthy they have more opportunity to be healthy.
Another point to consider is offering all people high quality treatment methods and medicine. Preventive measures cannot exclude diseases and health problems. In other words people always have different diseases and problems connected with health, and medicine institution should offer to people treatment methods. For example, according to some all viruses mutate and can be sustainable for antibiotics that are available, in this case medicine institution should have enough money to spend them on developing and creating new drugs.
In conclusion, the government should give financial help to medicine institutions and encourage them to develop both prevention measures and treatment methods.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42448979592 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74266277251 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6610705697 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.818181818 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241780596272 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108922719491 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064474037314 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173408360043 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686477085954 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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