Problem and solution essays: Education and teaching.
These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people, want to become a teacher, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved.
The teaching profession is losing its popularity. Majority of graduate prefer jobs with a better pay scale. In my country, the problem getting worse day by day and it is important to take steps to make teaching a lucrative profession. This essay will focus on the main causes of the problem, and propose some solution.
One of the main cause of the problem is considerably lower pay scale of the teachers in comparison to other professions. For instance, the average monthly income for a marketing professional is significantly higher, and has additional benefits. In Ukraine, the young doctor with no work experience, earns three times more than a teacher with 30 years of experience. The best solution is for the government to increase teacher’s salary, which should attract more people into the profession.
The second cause of a problem is challenging pupil’s behaviour. Modern day students don’t respect the teachers. The pupils disobeying are the biggest problem for the teachers. The intensive exposure to the new technology and bad parenting could be the reasons for that. To tackle this issue, parents must do a better job in parenting their children and teach them to respect the teachers.
The third cause of the problem is an enormous amount of paperwork. Usually, along with the teaching teachers have to perform a lot of paperwork such as preparing materials for the classes, checking homework and filling up the classroom journal. This problem could be solved simply, by hiring more teacher assistants. It can significantly improve the work-life balance for teachers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26070038911 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92983448551 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1002518746 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193513763556 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063995695963 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538532835605 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11647921367 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309303761256 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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