Teacher is the main person, which plays an important role in every student life. In this essay i will discuss the causes for avoiding teaching proficiency because of paying less for them and not equally treating with other jobs. In this essay I will also suggest some ideas by giving good salaries and by treating them equally with others.
The two main causes for major people are not taking teaching field because now-a-days, so many people around the world are giving main importance to engineers, doctors, lawyers etc. But the teacher play a role in every doctor, engineer, lawyers life. But they are not seeing that as a professionwhich is equal to them. Most of the population think that they need to settle in a good job where every one can respect them so that, many people are avoiding this proficiency. The second cause for this is less paying to teachers. So many people will assume that it's a low paying job.
Main solution for these causes are giving equal importance to teaching proficiency, Then many people will choose that field. These measures should be taken by government and increase their respect all over the world by giving good salaries and some bonus. So that every people in world think it was equal with other jobs too. For instance, My friend who dreams her carrer as a teacher but their parents not supported because of less paying and not more respectable. So,she does not fulfill her dream. When every individual mind set should be also in the same way, then no one can choose it as a job. By increasing salaries and treating it as a proficiency would decline the causes.
In conclusion, every individual student needs a teacher. So people as well as government should encourage towards teaching field. This essay discussed the causes by less paying and lack of respect and suggested to take measures by government to provide enough salaries and treat equally with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81707317073 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43871187022 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7044860664 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1578947368 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854492956189 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030438967273 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239610003452 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588621234957 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180517996227 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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