You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it

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You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

2-feb-2019,
chirala.
To,
The library,
St. Ann's college of engineering and technology,
chirala.
Respected sir,
I am jagarlamudi lakshmi prasanna bearing hallticket number 14F01A0476. I am studying in the stream of Electronics and communication engineering.
As I take a book from library on last month. The due date of my book is completed. But I have not submitted the book due to the sick of my relatives. so I went to their house for sewing them. so I am not able to refer that book so that I am not able to submit the book.
so I request you to give some time for my preparation and I can submit that book after the completion of my preparation please accept my mistake and I hope that you can understand my problem and gave me permission.
Sorry for the late submission and I promise you that I can't repeat this mistake again.
Thanking you sir,
Yours obediently,
lakshmi prasanna.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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2-feb-2019, chirala. To, The library, St. Ann...
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2-feb-2019, chirala. To, The library, St. Anns college of engi...
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...eb-2019, chirala. To, The library, St. Anns college of engineering and tech...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s college of engineering and technology, chirala. Respected sir, I am jaga...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...technology, chirala. Respected sir, I am jagarlamudi lakshmi prasanna beari...
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...y, chirala. Respected sir, I am jagarlamudi lakshmi prasanna bearing hal...
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Line 8, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ctronics and communication engineering. As I take a book from library on last mont...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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... book due to the sick of my relatives. so I went to their house for sewing them. ...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: So
... I went to their house for sewing them. so I am not able to refer that book so tha...
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Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... that I am not able to submit the book. so I request you to give some time for m...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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...at I am not able to submit the book. so I request you to give some time for my ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...at I am not able to submit the book. so I request you to give some time for my ...
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Line 10, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tand my problem and gave me permission. Sorry for the late submission and I pro...
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Line 11, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ission. Sorry for the late submission and I promise you that I cant repeat thi...
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Line 11, column 57, Rule ID: CANT[1]
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...te submission and I promise you that I cant repeat this mistake again. Thanking ...
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... that I cant repeat this mistake again. Thanking you sir, Yours obediently, ...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...this mistake again. Thanking you sir, Yours obediently, lakshmi prasanna.
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... Thanking you sir, Yours obediently, lakshmi prasanna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74683544304 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94509931894 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9759838168 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1818181818 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207279414279 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068644065127 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481616149964 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753403089501 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053809802948 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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