Question: Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people think this is a positive development, but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified.
Discuss both views.
There is an ever increasing of transfering food, particularly fruits and vegetables , to faraway places in which it seems pretty impossible to grow them that are not in season. It is often argued that this is a positive trend, whilst others disagree and think it willlead to adverse ramifications. .
On the one hand, it enables countries to establish interconnections among them. In other words, by exporting food they also sign some kinds of contracts like about the food quality and taste immutability which may lead them to better mutual connections. It is therefore argued that an increase in this paradox is not only beneficial to the countries' reputation, but also it contributes to the health field as well. Vitamins and minerals tgat are derived from them are prime examples which play an important role in human growth or evaluation.
On the other hand, many disagree and feel that this has numerous drawbacks too, especially in terms of finance and environment. Despite this, it would be virtually impossible to deliver them from one place to another distant one without the aid of air transportation or they would go off before they reach their destination. So, this essay disagrees that the number of flights which serve to transport food should be lessened for this reason.
In conclusion, while the benefits of this trend allow states to build social interconnections within them, some still feel that people should be wary when it comes to the detrimental effects on the environment and some monetary issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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...k it willlead to adverse ramifications. . On the one hand, it enables countries...
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
...s paradox is not only beneficial to the countries reputation, but also it contributes to ...
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Suggestion:
...owth or evaluation. On the other hand, many disagree and feel that this has num...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...environment and some monetary issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12749003984 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89195200492 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2167791488 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.7 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261815802636 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928655027328 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522546406985 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145978699694 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545432437445 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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