These days, online shopping is becoming increasingly popular all around the world. This trend offers a number of merits to both customers and sellers, while it has some drawbacks for both parties as this essay will demonstrate.
When it comes to buyers, the primary reason why they prefer to shop online as opposed to shopping is that it saves their time and energy. In other words, most of the people are not able to shop for their needs on account of hectic work schedules, which propels them to shop online for their needs and gives them a chance to save some of their valuable time and energy , which can therefore be utilized for something else. In addition to that, this is the best option for individuals who are not shopaholic and have no motivation to walk from one shop to the other as this facilitates to what they need to their doorstep by clicking a button on a website. Purchasing something online however does not ensure that customer receives a good as quality as what they witness on a screen, which leads ultimately to dissatisfaction of the customer. Not only that, buying online offers less choices, whereas super markets and other shops give people an opportunity to choose a product among number of brands. At the same time, they can experience bargaining power at some shops what online shopping lacks at all.
For sellers, this is a better chance to save money needs to maintain the business. For instance, were a few people to come to a textile shop for clothing, less employees need to be employed, thereby other workers can be laid off, and hence they can save money. The savings can be invested to increase the quality and variety of products, whereby more buyers can be attracted to the shop. However, customers easily forget what they see on the internet, whereas purchasing something they like from a shop remains in their mind for a longer time. This human behavior therefore a primary drawback for growing businesses as it is more difficult to build a persistent image in their customer’s mind.
In conclusion, distance shopping does save time and money although it offers less choices leading sometimes customer disappointment and reduce the possibility of a business to grow efficiently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun choices is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88157894737 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62396053352 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2587062922 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343220401592 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121079104554 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546850523174 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181149820271 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115772168522 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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