Question An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online

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Question: An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

style="color: rb(51, 51, 51);">In today’s world, no one can argue that technology has changed human lives significantly. In term of shopping style, the internet offers and improves a better and convenient way of purchasing as online shopping. E-commerce or online shopping is the buying and selling goods on the internet or business that is transacted by transferring data electronically. some people think that this measure has many advantages rather than disadvantages, while other think that it also has many disadvantages. Both sides will be discussed further within this essay.

style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">On the one hand, there are many advantages of online shopping. first and foremost, it can save a lot of time that people spend on shopping. if a person does not have time to travel to the shopping malls or does not have any idea where to get products, he/she also can search and order products online from home easily. On top of that people can also order some products from other parts of the world easily. For example, if western people want to get local products from Eastern countries such as tea or traditional asian cloths, they can be able to purchase authentic asian tea or a variety asian cloth styles through the internet.

style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">Moreover, unlike ordinary merchandises, online businesses are available all day all night. people can order whenever they want through online and do not have to worry about store will
close
. customers also are able to compare different shops, prices and qualify of goods before making decisions. For instance, many smart customers always go through the information about products in different store on the internet first which can help them to get good quality products and more reasonable price rather than buying from a traditional store. Al of these points support the idea that why e-commerce is very convenient and has become very popular these days.

style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">On the other hand, there also are some drawbacks from this trend. Firstly, personal checking items are definitely missing during shopping online. shoppers cannot be able to look
closely
at goods before making a decision. The sense of touching and feeling a product disappear from the process of shopping. if a shopper wants to touch and try a product before purchasing, it may be hard for them to make the right decision from buying a product online. For instance, some products such as shoes, ordering online may be very hard for customers to feel the comfort and style. Moreover, the online services are not as good as actual stores because it will be very hard to get refund or exchange.

style="margin-bottom: 10px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">In conclusion, even though online shopping provides many benefits which can attribute to less time consuming, unlimited day off and convenience, this method also has some drawbacks to customers such as lacking personal checking products and poor services. However, an individual can try and decide what shopping style that he/ she likes. Hopefully, with the high technology, it can develop the online shopping to be more effective and advanced in the future.

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Average: 6.7 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2734.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 515.0 315.596192385 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30873786408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14976560652 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493203883495 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9002728836 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.36 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.48 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174069360791 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054982788998 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047097757134 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897987062675 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464731495899 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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