Online shopping has become popular across the globe. A lot of people prefer to buy things online, due to it's easy availability. However, due to increase in such activities local companies are suffering, so it is important to encourage people to buy local stuffs. This can be mainly achieved by improving the quality of products made locally. I believe, shopping online helps to avoid hassle of going to different stores, however, it has created a negative impact on the overall health of the young people due to sedentary life style.
Increasing trend of online shopping has made people's life easier, as they can avail to a variety of different products without a trouble of going out of their homes. One can buy everything at anytime with just a click. Shopping apps like Amazon, Myntra, Big Basket, and many more have a range of different items, including local as well as international products. So, instead of going to a number of stores that takes a lot of time, online platforms helps to overcome such situations. The companies also are benefited greatly with such initiatives, as their overhead costs are reduced like they do not have to rent a store and no or less working staff such expenses are saved.
On the other side, shopping online is affecting health of youth. As, going out to supermarkets offer a bit of walking exercise due to their huge structure, this is now not practiced any more. The time that everyone requires to shop and get things in their basket increase the exposure to screen time, which damages the eye sight. And the limitation for a company arises as not everyone is familiar to buying online especially the elder people, so their targeted customer generally remains the youngsters.
The increase in number of online shoppers have resulted in downfall of the local market as online more of the international products are available. To overcome this situation of crisis, the local producers can increase their product availability on the internet and also can improve the quality of product. By increasing the quality, people can be attracted and local items can help in gaining back the economy.
In conclusion, online shopping helps in saving time and energy, however the timing needs to be manages efficiently in order to avoid the health consequences later in life. And for the local producer availability and quality can be increased to avoid the market crash.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 628, Rule ID: NOW
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
...ke they do not have to rent a store and no or less working staff such expenses are...
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO
Message: Did you mean 'shopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
...y more. The time that everyone requires to shop and get things in their basket increase...
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: EYE_BROW
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
...osure to screen time, which damages the eye sight. And the limitation for a company arise...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9702970297 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66535315492 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509900990099 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4520969097 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.684210526 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243233939333 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082845676379 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547541926308 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144392849402 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021366497234 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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