Dear Jayraj,
Hope you are doing well. I remember you talking about going on a camping trip to Polo forest this summer. As you know I have been there last year with my colleagues, and we had a great time there. I think you'll enjoy it too, as you are a love hiking, you will get to explore different trails there with different level of difficulties. The best thing about Polo forest is the the view from the top of the hill, which is mesmerizing.
Apart from the adventure stuffs, there are few negative points as well. As you are planning to stay for a night, you'll encounter few problems with the proper sanitary facility. There you won't find fully functional restrooms. They have open to sky bathrooms and also water supply is cut out at times. So you'll need to carry enough water for drinking and other purpose too.
I would really like to go to this place again with you, as I didn't had full hiking experience before. I just want to know the exact dates and plans for the trip so that I can clear my schedule for work accordingly.
So, I'll be waiting for the trip itinerary, and hope that i could join you . See you soon.
Thank You
Shivangi Datta
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...you soon. Thank You Shivangi Datta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, really, so, well, apart from, i think, talking about, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44651162791 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26751678563 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.527321849 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130949013584 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427191391122 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326864684202 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792482632297 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220829167489 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.