Reasons to join colleges or univeraities

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Reasons to join colleges or univeraities

Colleges or universities are foundational stones of modern world. Educational institutes play integral role to shape the modern world and people's life. Individuals join colleges or universities with various desires and expectations. This essay deals with the purpose of people to join college and university along with my opinion.

What are the reasons people join college or university? I believe that the want of different life experience, career preparation, gaining knowledge etc. are the main purpose of individuals to attend educational institutes.

Colleges and universities have a deep impact on many individuals life's. Colleges or universities are like a set stage for many individuals to show talent or skills and raising this talent to maximum levels. However educational institutes organize various types of tournaments or competitions at various levels with the help of governments to encourage students. For example, every year Indian government arrange various competitions like sports, dance, arts, singing etc. Between colleges and universities at different levels.

Furthermore, different kind of people, with different background, from different corners of the nation and maybe few international students attend colleges and universities. Interaction with the different kind of people help students to understand the different cultures and respect view-point of other people's. Moreover, intercourse with different cultures broaden the view-point of individual to see the world.

Apart from that, college or university degree is mandatory to get better or high ranked job in reputed company. Degree is general proof of individuals qualification and certain type of knowledge or skill. Addition to this, colleges or universities have a certain type of courses or programs that give opportunities to people to gain knowledge in specialised field.

To put it in nutshell, i pen down saying that people ambition to attend educational institutes is to get or deliver better and secure future.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, for example, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74247491639 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14301918399 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2898563502 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3684210526 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182058798229 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746322428971 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108418722888 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992076517887 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785857782822 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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