With the recent development in the technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
there is thought by some people that because of the recent technological impovement like e-books, the printed media such as newspapers, books an magazines will be the past shortly. In my opinion, although huge technological development occurs to replace the print media, this will not be the past because of the public demand.
Firstly, technology is developing very fast results invention of electronic media namely facebook ,youtube or other electronic news channels. As a result, people has got all information and news in one device like mobile, even nobel books are replacing by the e-book. Moreover, people are geting busy day by day, so they prefer to check daily news by their mobile besides the working time. However, most of the people like to see the newspaper besides his morning tea. although a lots of electronic reading equipment available in the market, peolple still prefer to get newspaper from print media.
Secondly, most of the people do not read the nobel in electronic book because reader could consentrate more in the story by the printed book. reading nobel by electronic book is quit impossible to consentrate properly. For example, this is evedent that selling nobel books in the world is increasing day by day.
Finally, nowadays everyone are very much consern on their health. reading book or news by e-book or mobile causes visual problem, which makes people to choose printed books or newspaper.
In conclusion, although there is vast development on technology which invented many devices to replace books and newspaper, people will not leave printed media due to proper consentration on study and health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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there is thought by some people that because ...
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...printed media such as newspapers, books an magazines will be the past shortly. In ...
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Suggestion: an magazine; magazines
...printed media such as newspapers, books an magazines will be the past shortly. In my opinion...
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...tion of electronic media namely facebook ,youtube or other electronic news channel...
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... the newspaper besides his morning tea. although a lots of electronic reading equipment ...
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...paper besides his morning tea. although a lots of electronic reading equipment availab...
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... more in the story by the printed book. reading nobel by electronic book is quit imposs...
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... in the world is increasing day by day. Finally, nowadays everyone are very much...
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... are very much consern on their health. reading book or news by e-book or mobile causes...
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...oper consentration on study and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66969443174 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3925773202 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349977894492 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129226416571 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09353574749 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204804316793 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856195830269 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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