In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative
It is true that there's a comprehensible change within the size of family, and the roles of members of the family among husbands and wives have also been shifted significantly. While family formation patterns are changing in some ways, they consist of both positive and negative sides that are worth discussing
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On the one hand, there are several new changes of family composition. Firstly, there is an increasing number of kids living in sole-parent families because of the high divorce rate, not to mention the considerable number of single-parent families who want to own children without being married. Additionally, nowadays we tend to stay in small nuclear families instead of large extended families. Indeed, there's less need for the joint family due to economic security since many folks can afford new houses. Furthermore, because of the increased labor force participation of mothers who are given opportunities to access further education as well as pursue their dream careers, dual-earner families are on the increase. In other words, women have also become breadwinners together with their husbands as they're financially independent.
In my opinion, I feel that this development has both advantages and downsides. Without the help of their partners, many lone parents might face financial difficulty. As a result, children from these single-parent families are more likely to drop out of schools because they find it difficult to afford high tuition fees. Additionally, many children might suffer an absence of parental guidance and love since busy parents have less contact with them. On the opposite hand, living in an exceedingly small-sized family means members of the family can avoid unmanageable and complex problems rising between the young and the old like generation gap. Moreover, the changes within the roles of members of the family may well be seen as valuable progress as many men don't seem to be put under pressure of covering the requirements for the whole families, and girls don't need to sacrifice their jobs so as to look after children and assume domestic responsibilities.
In conclusion, although there are a variety of changes in family roles together with the structure of family, i feel that both benefits and disadvantages of those changes do exist at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27027027027 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90096084908 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586486486486 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3181674697 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297429700779 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983456758332 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918255920911 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218675058915 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705412201885 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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