In this rapid moving and scientific era where technological advancements have enthralled the entire world, life has become enormously stressful in an unprecedented manner. Man has attained extreme success in various areas but also generated innumerable health problems. According to my perception, competitive world, unavoidable circumstances, excessive expectations and limited resources can be considered the reasons for this absurd.
To commence the discussion, life has become more stressful than the bygone era. Firstly, in this technological and highly competitive, every individual has enumerable aspirations to become successful and achieve a prosperous life in this world. Higher expectations towards achieving excellence in their particular field makes them so worried that they turn an oblivious ear towards the real significance of life. Moreover, growing inflation and limited resources can be considered a noticeable reason towards this menace. Most of the people find to inconvenient to fulfill all their needs and become victim to various stress-related problems.
Reinforcing my perspective further, many people are suffering from blood pressure and diabetes problems due to their unforgiving and malicious nature. According to the expert doctors and psychologists, present generation demonstrates reluctance and less compassionate attitude towards the living creatures. To overcome this problem, individuals need to apprehend their circumstances and try to live contended life. Secondly, people should make all possible endeavors to manage their finances according to their income sources. Apart from this, humans should develop adaptable and flexible attitude towards the society and the creatures.
Concludingly, we can comprehend that people suffer from stress related problems due to their spontaneous negligence towards their health and the creation. They should refrain from excessive aspirations with limited resources. They should adopt optimistic approach to overcome the trials and tribulations of life in order to live comfortable life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unprecedented manner" with adverb for "unprecedented"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11301369863 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1513009374 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8874362994 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225819502363 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765075443176 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664465231146 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137467438809 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462691685917 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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