In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
The issue of whether shopping from small shops or big malls has grown in importance over the past few decades. while there are disadvantages to shopping from local stores. I personally believe the advantages of shopping from big malls centers are far more.
On the one hand, many commentators justifiably argue that there are advantages to shopping from big malls. From their point of view, purchasing from mega malls providing whatever customers needed in one place which is could lead in time management because customers can buy everything without wasting time and searching between many stores. It is also mentioned from financial view point this method of buying could result saving money because first this shops pricing can be monitoring and also many discounts are provided there.
On the other hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that shopping from local stores has several benefits. They argue that shopping from small shops will help local people to earn some money for their family who live in deprived areas. However, I believe these way of business is eliminating soon because people tend to buy from big shopping centers, so they must find alternative jobs in those big shopping centers.
I personally believe, although shopping from local shops might have some positive points, the negative points are far more. I believe shopping from big malls has numerous benefits such as controlling pricing and time management.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...n importance over the past few decades. while there are disadvantages to shopping fro...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n importance over the past few decades. while there are disadvantages to shopping fro...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ver customers needed in one place which is could lead in time management because c...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this way' or 'these ways'?
Suggestion: this way; these ways
...e in deprived areas. However, I believe these way of business is eliminating soon because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19574468085 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4768223922 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557446808511 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2106260363 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363151738125 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172673773942 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550174423993 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252385629298 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402780303087 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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