Increasing crime rate is becoming a major issue among young people in cities. Young people are the future of the country and this problem can inhibit the growth and economy as well, therefore it needs to be addressed and deal with the joint efforts of everyone present in the society.
There are many reasons for drastic rise in the crimes committed by young people, one of them is, unemployment, the level of unemployment is directly proportional to the crime rates. Therefore people resort to alternative ways, such as robbery, to feed their families. Some youngsters can also be bribed to do various types of felony in order to make some money. At a very early age, young people usually succumbs to peer pressure and fall into traps of endless mistakes. For example, on the British streets we see a lot of youngsters fighting near the pubs under the influence of alcohol and other sedating agents. These fights can foster animosity between them and because of this outrage, they commit offensive crimes. modern technology is also a cause for increased crimes. there is no proper surveillance on the content of programs that young people can access. There is a lot of crime related series that anyone can have access to, therefore young people often gets attracted to such things which can turn into a crime. .
This problem can be resolved by early rehabilitation and mutual interaction among the young people involved in the crimes. Young people should not be put in the prison as they could get more violent and this can extend the rage which is already inside them. Instead, they can be given some counselling by expertise and can be involved in different types of field work, for example, in old age homes. If the crime is unavoidable, after serving the prison, they should be given some vocational trainings to solve the problem of unemployment, which can make their life better. Parents of the offenders can talk to their children about the problems and try to maintain a close relationships with them and watch their activities very carefully and guide them with the principles of life.However, we all can work collectively to solve this ongoing menace.
In conclusion, crime can never be resolved by punishments but with the love and respect given equally to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04307692308 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72079695947 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.036993158 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.9 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16463888633 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682974935098 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467698193506 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112335941163 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328205934065 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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