It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this problem?

Growth in juvenile crime is usually thought to be prompted by the violence in media. I do not agree that it is the main reason behind crimes in teenagers. This essay will present some other factors responsible for the crimes and the solutions that can help to deal with it.
There are a number of reasons for the drastic increase in crime among young children. One of them is the violence in media. The media openly showcase the brutal activities. For instance murder of young children, extortion, child trafficking, drug abuse and much more. Violent scenes shown in the cartoon are a part of daily life. The motive of media is to create chaos among people, especially young children which can be an easy target to get influenced by the violent content as teenagers try to mimic everything happening in the surrounding. Others reasons such as lack of education and careless parenting also account for the surge in crime. Illiterate young children are unable to judge the difference between the legal and illegal things. Therefore they are willing to do any activity which can support their living and hence, they resort doing crimes. Similarly, parents who often are busy with their schedule that they hardly get to see their young ones are likely to go astray and hence may end up doing crimes. Moreover, peer pressure is also responsible for the increasing crimes amongst teenagers.

There are a number of ways to tackle the menace of rising crime among adolescents. Firstly, the government should carefully scrutinize the content displayed on every channel by the media. Any means of violence should be banned to showcase. A free education should be provided in all classes of society to help children progress and judge their future. Rehabilitation should be provided for the teenagers already suffering domestic violence and many other problems that may invoke them to crime. A close observation by the parents of young ones is a very vital step to prevent juvenile crimes.
In conclusion, not only violence in media is held accountable for the rise in teenage crime but other factors surrounding us may also be responsible. Therefore joint effort by the members of the country can plunge the juvenile crime and may lead our children to the bright future.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96315789474 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58982132882 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8332267136 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323094211705 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945733955592 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774191006841 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231384937955 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107394674876 0.056905535591 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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