Reasons to describe our personality have challenging debates among scientists. Some of them attribute traits of human beings to genes, and some of them think that traits are achieved during our life time beside genetic characteristics.
The huge amount of our DNA information is conveyed by our ancestors to us and we will convey them to our future generations. It seems that majority of our behaviors have their roots in our genes. For example dramatic situations or critical moods make us forget our nature and at these positions we can not concentrate properly and even we can not be able to control ourselves, and in such unpredictable positions we will show our nature based behaviors. Therefore, these are confident witness to effects of nature in our traits. However, we learn to change variety of our characteristics in different respective environments.
The fact that environment (nature) shapes our personality is unavoidable. During life, human beings learn, train, fail, gain, and many other experiences that they would earn. By encountering to vicissitudes of life they willingly or unwillingly are changed by their surroundings. From the beginning of life people are afraid of loneliness and their clever minds let them to avoid it by practicing and repeating some traits and even they become very prosperous in expending their minds and improving their behaviors.
All in all, I believe that nature and nature are always in interaction and we can choose to let them fulfill independently or dependently because we are clever creatures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28514056225 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0522352567 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2827576802 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252005951711 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103086554799 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602632749655 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136793349467 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075780621528 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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