Research indicates that the characteristics we born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experience we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.
The Many scientist hold the opinion that the characteristic which people get by birth is more useful for enhancing personality traits rather than to improve those attributes which we strive to improve in our entire life. My inclination supports the view of statement that influence of life experience is more significant to escalate the value of personality.
Numerous studies have consistently found by different countries that those people who have god gifted characteristics are more productive in their work as compare to others that even actually build interest as well when it goes parallel. For instance, number of people have passion to be a supports man, actor and others but, owing to unavailability of opportunity or obstacles from families they have to move towards deliberately any other profession which is fully opposed by nature, which also becomes the cause of stress and anxiety. Furthermore, many intellectual people are concerned that personality is your personal reality which you demonstrate in front of the entire world whether its god gifted or fabricated. But, a character which is given by the god is more attractive than fabricated as said by many researchers.
Moreover, it is fairly easy to comprehend that people who choose the destination against the nature which have definitely number of disadvantage as well as it can ruin the life to some extent. Many adepts assert that every individual have their own nature and habits and every people want to spend their life accordingly which means, nobody can forced people to spend life pertaining to others. It is just like as extract the soul from body that actually works as a robotic person.
To sum up, in order to be enhanced better and quality of life people should do work on their desired area that will increases motivation and indulgence too. Hence, parents and seniors should encourage their children to work with born abilities that will be more worthwhile in practical life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l be more worthwhile in practical life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17445482866 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82467090721 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0609714372 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267510316288 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924957255076 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439386205768 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150185070166 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605643256055 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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