Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experience we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
People characteristics stood out of all priorities since the down of time. Throughout history, that is a controversial issue that our genetics has more influence rather than our experience in life. It is agreed that our instinct characteristics have effect on person identity, but in my point of view experience in life has a remarkable impact on our personality and development.
In the one hand, scientists believe that everyone has unique characteristics. They find out that some behaviors and personalities such as envy or being kind is depended on our nature. It has been saying that if someone has cruel character, that is difficult to remedy that person behavior. For instance, human have some lucrative behavior such as having a sense of empathy or being merciful, In comparison with some unpleasant characteristics like be offender or duplicity that has direct relation with their instinct.
On the other hand, some people, including me believe that experience in life have more influence on our life than genetics characteristics. It is obvious from this that some factors such as our environment we live, communities, family, education, job circumstances and etc. have a significant impact on our personality. As an example, people who were optimistic may change to pessimistic person or a person might be born as a wicked person, but grow up and be a beneficial person to society.
In my conclusion, it has been proven that life experience has major consequences on our personalities and developments than the characteristics we are born. We are able to will and decide to achieve something we desire. Therefore, it is important for us to be selective in choosing the place to live, workplace and friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...s, family, education, job circumstances and etc. have a significant impact on our person...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15357142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28232550401 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9004089962 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459696682197 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146312491316 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108312173142 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281468994771 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759625484004 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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