In many countries, children are engaged on some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experiences important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
The issue of children pays work is a complex and sensitive one since the down of time. Throughout history, that is controversial subject that child working is wrong or valuable for their future. It is agreed that distinctive kind of people in society would have different concerns. This argument will be proven by looking at how working in young age assists children to develop the sense of responsibility.
For one, in this issue an important consideration is the kind of work under taken; As a matter of fact, because of low level of education doing repetitious and intolerable tasks in a factory production line. They do a repetitive job without learning new thing. It is an unfortunate fact that many employers prefer to use young children to save money by paying less than adult one. As this show, masters can easily misuse children.
In addition to this, in many countries children work because their family's economic problems. It is very difficult to judge that it is wrong for children to contribute to the family income in this way. On the other hand, in better economic circumstances, few parents have a tendency to send children out to part time paid work. It is obvious from this that children can experience unknown environments with new people. For instance, my younger brother works part-time in vicinity of our home. His job required to observe some role and demand him to be responsible and discipline. As my example show, working and accepting responsibility has a positive effect on my brother.
In conclusion, it has been proven that, parent should teach their children and encourage them to broaden their horizon to choose their way of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...have a tendency to send children out to part time paid work. It is obvious from this that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94306049822 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8031186102 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9101527361 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324808413191 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970142895772 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048369625404 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168156383509 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944395830023 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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