In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
Nowadays, there are a lot of free materials on the internet and people can download
these materials such as books ,musics without paying money.Many people , specially young people download these materials. However , there are both and pros to doing this.
One of the main positives of downloading materials from internet for no charge is saving money.What l mean by this is that people do not have to pay extra money for these materials and this allows them to spend money on other things instead of this.Therefore, this gives people an opportunity to read books or to listening music without wasteing money.
Another advantage is saving time.In fact, people should go to market for buying these materials and this is time-consuming for people due to in some cases people cannot find books or other things in most markets and they spend a lot of time for finding these materials while they can do it by means of computer or telephone on internet at home.As a consequence , people do not lose track of time and they can use the saved time for doing their other works properly.
Turning to other sides of the argument putting books or music on internet for no charge is not so good for all people . it is well known that poets musicians earn money from sailing of these materials and as a result of putting these materials free on internet they cannot make a living.So that, they encounter financial problem thats why they cannot print a new book or compose new music and this negatively affects society’s development.
All things considered, putting books or music on internet for no charge is not always useful for people.people need to weigh up the pros of saving money and time and the cons of causing financial problems for poets and musicians.Personally,l strongly believe that the benefits in terms of putting free materials on internet for individuals outweigh any negatives.
Hasan.q
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.965625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8000938294 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490625 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.793693763 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.0 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.7142857143 20.7667163134 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168063044649 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905387273238 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464656566544 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935483419052 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485616758372 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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