Every person should stay at school until the age of eighteen. Do you agree or disagree?
With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to dangerous . what solution can you suggest to deal with this problem?
A problem concering great many people in the modern information age is the tremendous increase in the number of little ones who have unregulated accessability to internet which can end up with risky circumstances because of ubiquitous nature of web connection. The aim of this essay is to provide several rational resolutions to the issue.
A step that can be taken by the parents is to do not neglect presence of malicios people surfing internet. The vast majority of grown ups does not care about what their children do on computer if they are engaged in an activity that will keep them quiet. Only a little bit of attention to what they do on web can help the young avoid any exposure to danger. Furthermore,limiting maximum amount of time that can be spent in front of any technological gadget can be helpful as it also wanes chance of encountering any malovelent person
On their turn,authorized organizations can make regulations regarding to explotation of internet by underages.In most cases,age restrictions are just a empty warning. Simple means like ID card control would be adequate to deal with the matter and additionally it would make finding vicious easier because all their information would be in the database.
To sum up security of youngsters using websites and social media is a serious issue and it can be tackled by responsibilty of both the parents and officials. if both side be responsive enough to cope with the issue,virtual world would be a safe and harmless location for the posterity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96283783784 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06260375663 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6630299895 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0417946380357 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188889525217 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186567832081 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0209114576191 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214012352017 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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