Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising family‚ and therefore the government should support them financially.Do you agree or disagree??
nowadays ,money people prefer to use their own cars to commute rather than buses or trains ,Why do you think this happening?What can the government do to change it?
The main total of commuting is probably public transportation , but nowadays the non-stop progress of car industry gives people chance to own car in order to commute.There are numerous reasons in the roots of this ongoing trend and governments can take measures to change this situation.
To being with reasons behind this tendency is that public transportation is becoming uncomfortable and crowded for. Sometimes people encounter some problems on the road.For instance, traffic jams causes people be late on work.Consequently, happen with their boss.In addition, more often than not the speed of trains may be very low and it is not useful for them.Utilizing their own car , firstly is more comfortable .They can commute their workplaces easily by car rather than buses or trains.
There are always solutions and government should take step forward to change situation better.One of the possible solution is that in order to persuade people to use public transport, government should pey attention to keep good condition.For example,it would be better to provide public transportation with air conditioner in summer.Also the number of metro stations can be increased to prevent overcrowddenes.
In summary, the reasons of overusing private cars rather than buses or trains include uncomfortable condition of public transportation and traffic jam on the toads.To find a solution government take some measures, for example to keep public transportation good condition and roads can be widened
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42084942085 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16146053654 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.785947397 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.0 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1666666667 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137247123929 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734756229727 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565747339664 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854393704345 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502297893108 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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