studies for career reasons or interest

Essay topics:

studies for career reasons or interest

The first graph shows that about 80% of students under 26 studies for career reasons. That percentage dropped in the next decades about 10-20 percent. In fourth decade, there has been an identical percentage reason for study, career or interest (about 40%). However, it reached approximately 20% over 49.
In contrary, study for interest in the young age under 26 were just 10% for interest and there has been a gradual increase in study for interest. In the third decade, it reached almost 24%, in the next decade 40 % and over 49 allocated 70% for interest.
The second graph shows that employer support was closely 70% under 26%, and it declined to about 50% in the next decade. After age 30-39 again, there has been a slight increase, and it reached approximately 36% in fourth decade and almost 43% over 49. It is unclear whether employ support is for older age, but the graph shows the highest amount of employ support is for under 26.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70303030303 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31253126291 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7635346105 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363158716525 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145095862476 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162397245144 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266757556487 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153558111722 0.0819641961636 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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